Saturday, September 24, 2011


Today's 100 words:

I slowed down as I walked past his office and glanced inside, as I always did. Even though we were no longer together, even though he had told me it was over, that he couldn't be with me, that he didn't see a future for us, I couldn't stop caring for him, loving him. I "stalked" him, I suppose, but never maliciously. I just wanted to know he was okay. But that day I looked into his office and saw him talking to her, their heads bent close together. I understood. I wasn't her. I could never be her.


  1. Hi Dana! I really enjoyed this one. You got a lot of emotion out of your 100 words!

  2. Thank you, Scott. I really appreciate that. I'd been contemplating taking this one a little further--and now you've given me the confidence. :)

  3. ooo. guess she found her closure. nice piece.